请大家来帮我修改英语,Last Sunday,I asked my friend linda what she did in May Day Holiday.She said that she and her parents went to visit Longhu Mountain.It's many beautiful views there,and the sky was blue and air was very clear and fresh.F

请大家来帮我修改英语,Last Sunday,I asked my friend linda what she did in May Day Holiday.She said that she and her parents went to visit Longhu Mountain.It's many beautiful views there,and the sky was blue and air was very clear and fresh.F
请大家来帮我修改英语,
Last Sunday,I asked my friend linda what she did in May Day Holiday.She said that she and her parents went to visit Longhu Mountain.It's many beautiful views there,and the sky was blue and air was very clear and fresh.Finally,Linda told me that they could hear the monkeys shout during the night.
上个星期日,我问我的朋友琳达她在五一假期做什么.她说她和她的父母游览龙虎山.这里有许多漂亮的风景,天空是蓝的,空气非常干净和新鲜.最后,在晚上他们可以听见猴子的叫声.

请大家来帮我修改英语,Last Sunday,I asked my friend linda what she did in May Day Holiday.She said that she and her parents went to visit Longhu Mountain.It's many beautiful views there,and the sky was blue and air was very clear and fresh.F
Last Sunday,I asked my friend linda what she had done in May Day Holiday.She said that she visited Longhu Mountain with her parents .There were many beautiful views and lovely monkeys.the sky was blue and air was very clear and fresh.Finally,Linda told me that they could hear the monkeys shout during the night.

Last Sunday,I asked my friend linda what had she done in May Day Holiday.She said that she went to visit Longhu Mountain with her parents.There were many beautiful views ,and the sky was blue and the air was quite clear and fresh.Finally,Linda told me that they could hear the monkeys shout during the night.

Last Sunday,I asked my friend linda what she had done in The May Day"Golden Week".She said that she and her parents visited Longhu Mountain.There are many beautiful scene:sky was blue and air was very clean and fresh.Finally,Linda told me that they could hear the monkeys' shout during the night.

Last Sunday,I asked my friend linda what she had done in May Day Holiday.She said that she and her parents went to visit Longhu Mountain.There were many beautiful views and the sky was blue and air was very clear and fresh.Finally,Linda told me that they could hear the monkeys shouting during the night.
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It's many beautiful views there. 应该是 There were many beautiful views.