帮我看看这段话中有没有错误``谢谢噢A wonderful day,boys and girls!I'm glad to stand here again.Today I'll let you know my favourite star Aaron Carter.Aaron Carter is a pop star in America.He has a big family.There're five people in Aar

帮我看看这段话中有没有错误``谢谢噢A wonderful day,boys and girls!I'm glad to stand here again.Today I'll let you know my favourite star Aaron Carter.Aaron Carter is a pop star in America.He has a big family.There're five people in Aar
帮我看看这段话中有没有错误``谢谢噢
A wonderful day,boys and girls!I'm glad to stand here again.Today I'll let you know my favourite star Aaron Carter.
Aaron Carter is a pop star in America.He has a big family.
There're five people in Aaron's family,his father,mother,brother and a twin sister.He's twin sister is younger than his brother .Aaron was born a minute later than his twin sister.So Aaron is the youngest one in his family.Few days ago ,he finished his birthday of 18 years old.
Aaron's brother is Nick Carter.Nick is a famous star.I am sure some of you know him .He is a member of BackStreet Boys.
Aaron Carter is a perfect boy.He does anything well.He likes doing many things such as piano,ski,drive,guitar,drum,saxophone and so on.Now 他在一个全球知名的大学里读书（翻译下）
I hope one day I can meet him in America.So I will learn English harder.If you think he is great so let's learn English harder.

帮我看看这段话中有没有错误``谢谢噢A wonderful day,boys and girls!I'm glad to stand here again.Today I'll let you know my favourite star Aaron Carter.Aaron Carter is a pop star in America.He has a big family.There're five people in Aar
这里是改完的,可以对照参考一下.前面写的都不错.:)
It will be a wonderful day with you guys!I'm glad to stand here again.Today I'll let you know my favourite star Aaron Carter.
Aaron Carter is a pop star in America.He has a big family.
There're five people in Aaron's family,his father,mother,brother and a twin sister.He's twin sister is younger than his brother .Aaron was born a minute later than his twin sister.So Aaron is the youngest one in his family.Few days ago ,he finished his 18th birthday.
Aaron's brother is Nick Carter.Nick is a famous star.I am sure some of you know him .He is one of the members of BackStreet Boys.
Aaron Carter is a perfect boy.He does everything well.He likes playing many instruments like the piano,guitar,drum,saxophone,and also likes skiing and driving.Now,he studies in a world-famous university.I hope one day I can meet him in America,so I will learn English harder and better.If you think he is great,let's learn English harder.(最后这句话的意思不太好.那个歌手伟大和努力学英语好象没有必然联系.可以自己再改改.

Now 他在一个全球知名的大学里读书
Now he is studying in a world famous college.

Few days ago ,he finished his birthday of 18 years old.
我觉得应该是 a few day ago
另外不懂你表达的意思,是他过完了18岁生日吗?
He's twin sister is younger than his brother
He's 改His
He does anything well ...

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Few days ago ,he finished his birthday of 18 years old.
我觉得应该是 a few day ago
另外不懂你表达的意思,是他过完了18岁生日吗?
He's twin sister is younger than his brother
He's 改His
He does anything well
anything 改everything
ski, drive,
貌似是skiing driving
He is studying in a world-famous university
最后一句so去掉~

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He's twin sister is younger than his brother
改为his twin sister is younger than him
He does anything well
改为He does everything well
He likes doing many things such as piano, ski, driv...

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He's twin sister is younger than his brother
改为his twin sister is younger than him
He does anything well
改为He does everything well
He likes doing many things such as piano, ski, drive, guitar, drum, saxophone and so on
改为He likes doing many things，such as playing piano,sking,driving,playing guitar and drun, and so on.
now he is studying in a world-renowned university

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Wonderful day,boys and girls! I'm glad standing here again. Today I'll let you know something about my favourite star Aron Carter.
Aaron Carter is a pop star in America. He has a big family.

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Wonderful day,boys and girls! I'm glad standing here again. Today I'll let you know something about my favourite star Aron Carter.
Aaron Carter is a pop star in America. He has a big family.
There're five people in Aaron's family, his father, mother, brother and twin sister. His twin sister is younger than his brother .Aaron was born a minute later than his twin sister. So Aaron is the youngest one in his family. A few days ago ,he finished his birthday of 18 years old.
Aaron's brother is Nick Carter. Nick is a famous star,too. I am sure some of you know him . He is a member of BackStreet Boys.
Aaron Carter is a perfect boy. He does everything well. He likes doing many things such as skiing, driving, palying the piano,guitar, drum, saxophone and so on. Now he is studying in a well-known university.I hope one day I can meet him in America. So I will learn English harder. If you think he is great, let's learn English harder.

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It's a wonderful day, boys and girls! I'm glad to be here again. Today I will let you know who my favorite star is. My favorite star is Aaron Carter.
Aaron Carter is a pop star in America. He has ...

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It's a wonderful day, boys and girls! I'm glad to be here again. Today I will let you know who my favorite star is. My favorite star is Aaron Carter.
Aaron Carter is a pop star in America. He has a big family. There are five people in Aaron's family, his father, mother, brother, and a twin sister. His twin sister is younger than his brother. Aaron was born a minute after his twin sister, so Aaron is the youngest one in his family. He just had his 18 years old birthday a few days ago. Aaron's brother is Nick Carter. Nich is a famous star too, I'm sure some of you know him. He is a member of Backstreet Boys. Aaron Carter is a talented boy, he can do many things well. He likes to do many things such as piano, ski, drive, playing the guitar, drum, saxophone and so on. Now he is attending a well known college. I hope one day I can meet him in America. So I have to imrpove my English now! If you think he is great too, let's learn English together!

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