请帮我把这个摘要的英文翻译修改一下,中文原文在后边,Abstract :With the process of urbanization in China has continued to improve,on solving the "three rural issues" and increasing the income of peasants,all parts of the country

请帮我把这个摘要的英文翻译修改一下,中文原文在后边,Abstract :With the process of urbanization in China has continued to improve,on solving the "three rural issues" and increasing the income of peasants,all parts of the country
请帮我把这个摘要的英文翻译修改一下,中文原文在后边,
Abstract :With the process of urbanization in China has continued to improve,on solving the "three rural issues" and increasing the income of peasants,all parts of the country to vigorously develop services industry,the majority of farmers have employment of migrant workers.Attendant population migration caused many social problems,especially migrant workers children of compulsory education issues have become increasingly prominent.In this paper,based on the realization urban migrant children equal access to education in terms of our farmers at this stage the children of migrant workers The compulsory education situation,problems and solutions to these problems discussed ways.Keywords :urban,mobile population,migrant workers,migrant workers children,education,fair
摘要：随着我国城市化进程的不断推进,围绕解决“三农”问题和增加农民收入,全国各地大力发展劳务产业,广大农民纷纷进城务工就业.随之而来的人口迁移带来了许多社会问题,尤其是进城务工农民子女义务教育问题日趋突出.本文立足于实现城市流动人口子女接受教育机会平等的角度对我国现阶段进城务工农民子女的接受义务教育状况、存在问题、以及解决这些问题的途径进行了论述.
关键词：城市化,流动人口,进城务工农民,进城务工农民子女,教育,公平.

请帮我把这个摘要的英文翻译修改一下,中文原文在后边,Abstract :With the process of urbanization in China has continued to improve,on solving the "three rural issues" and increasing the income of peasants,all parts of the country
Abstract :With the constant process of urbanization in China,on solving the "three rural issues" and increasing the income of farmers,all parts of the country are vigorously developing service industry,and a larger number of farmers choose to join the migrant population as workers into the urban.The moving of these migrant workers are meanwhile bringing many social issues,one of the gradually significant issues being their children's schooling in the urban.In this paper,the main issue dealt with are the migrant workers' children getting equal access to schooling in the urban.Aspects argued are current situation of these children's educational status,problems and issues existing,and the possible solutions to these problems and issues.
Keywords :Urbanization,migrant population,migrant workers into the urban,migrant workers' children,education,equal
注:我只是把原先表达得不够恰当的一些名词、形容词改过来了,比如fair改为equal,这两个词在英文意思里的区别可以在牛津英英或英汉词典的释义及例句中了解得更清楚.原文个别句子结构上或语法上不够严密不够准确的地方也改过来了.本人是英语师范专业毕业,有修改英语文章、词句的特长和爱好.这里我的修改版可供参考,如有不足之处欢迎质疑.

1.围绕解决最好用伴随状态，用concentrating on或者是focusing on
2.all parts of the country to vigorously develop services industry, the majority of farmers have employment of migrant workers
这句有点不合适，最好把前面一句作为后句...

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1.围绕解决最好用伴随状态，用concentrating on或者是focusing on
2.all parts of the country to vigorously develop services industry, the majority of farmers have employment of migrant workers
这句有点不合适，最好把前面一句作为后句的从句，大力发展劳务产业引发了农民工进城的这个状况，可以用result in
3.migrant workers children 用所有格。
compulsory education issues of migrant workers' children 反过来了
形容词用迫在眉睫的比较好，可以考虑用imminent.
4.based on realizing
5.in terms of our farmers at this stage the children of migrant workers 这句我不太懂
6.and solutions to these problems （were) discussed. WAYS不用，有SOLUTION可以了。

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