求改英语作文,As we all know ,the population of China is larger than that of any other country in the world.So,it can also take lots of problems to the country.The government have took some measures to reduce the raise of China’s population.Th

求改英语作文,As we all know ,the population of China is larger than that of any other country in the world.So,it can also take lots of problems to the country.The government have took some measures to reduce the raise of China’s population.Th
求改英语作文,
As we all know ,the population of China is larger than that of any other country in the world.So,it can also take lots of problems to the country.The government have took some measures to reduce the raise of China’s population.The number of population have under the government’s control on recent years.
The also take another matters to china’s economic development.For that many people getting more and more old.So china have no way to supply enough labor force to develop the economy.
The best way to solve these problems are which we suggest that some rich people have more children.It’s the best way to balance the population and not cause that reduce the quality of population.

求改英语作文,As we all know ,the population of China is larger than that of any other country in the world.So,it can also take lots of problems to the country.The government have took some measures to reduce the raise of China’s population.Th
As we all know ,the population of China is larger than that of any other country in the world.So,it can also（ take改成bring比较好,“带来”） lots of problems to the country.The government have（ took改成taken） some measures to reduce the（ raise改成rise） of China’s population.The number of population （have改成has） under the government’s control （on改成in） recent years.
（The改成It） also（ take another matters不太通顺,改成cause another problem怎么样） to （china’s中China's） economic development.For that many people（加上are) getting（ more and more old改成older and older）.So China( have no way改成can't afford怎样） to supply enough labor force to develop the economy.
The best way to solve these problems （are改成is） （which改成that） we suggest (that可去掉,避免与前面的that重复而影响句子美观） some rich people have more children.It’s the best way to balance the population and not cause that（ reduce改成名词reduction） the quality of population.
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As we all know ,the population of China is larger than that of any other country in the world.So,it can also（ take改成bring比较好，“带来”） lots of problems to the country.The government have（ took改成taken） som...

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As we all know ,the population of China is larger than that of any other country in the world.So,it can also（ take改成bring比较好，“带来”） lots of problems to the country.The government have（ took改成taken） some measures to reduce the（ raise改成rise） of China’s population.The number of population （have改成has） under the government’s control （on改成in） recent years.
（The改成It） also（ take another matters不太通顺，改成cause another problem怎么样） to （china’s中China's） economic development.For that many people（加上are) getting（ more and more old改成older and older）.So China( have no way改成can't afford怎样） to supply enough labor force to develop the economy.
The best way to solve these problems （are改成is） （which改成that） we suggest (that可去掉，避免与前面的that重复而影响句子美观） some rich people have more children.It’s the best way to balance the population and not cause that（ reduce改成名词reduction） the quality of population.
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As we all know ,the population of China is larger than that of any other country in the world.So,it can also bring （ take改成bring比较好，“带来”） lots of problems to the country.The government have took some ...

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As we all know ,the population of China is larger than that of any other country in the world.So,it can also bring （ take改成bring比较好，“带来”） lots of problems to the country.The government have took some measures to reduce the birth rate（出生率） of China’s population.The number of population have been（要加 be 动词） under the government’s control in （on改成in） recent years.
This also cause（take 改成 cause） another matters to china’s economic development.Because more and more people are getting old(这句话整体改一下比较好).So china have no way to supply enough labor force to develop the economy.
The best way to solve these problems I suggest are（are改成is） that some rich people have more children.It’s the best way to balance the population and not cause decrease（换成这个词比较高级些吧） in the quality of population.
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